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Lani Nieu's avatar

Goosebumps from a few of the lines in this prose. Loved how you wrote it in a way that I could almost imagine myself being any of the 'characters' in the story ~

Ashes Of Love Poetry πŸ”₯'s avatar

Aww thank you πŸ₯° I definitely like to be able to put my readers in the narrators shoes but in this one you can chose your character. I love that you caught that❀️

cinema for sinners's avatar

Can you even imagine that she did this without asking me instructions? πŸ€£πŸ€˜πŸ»πŸ˜πŸ˜‡

Since we’re building off of my little β€œprompt,” my man brain would like this explained like it was written in crayon, πŸ–οΈ out here so everyone can see I’m a fair judge of contests in case things were contested later.

I’m trying to run a fair contest but if I were to be kinda weak, I might could bend the rules for someone explaining in detail which parts of this inspired goosebumps πŸͺΏπŸ‘Š

Also, I guess I’d only be 100% fair to invite @Vianne Armour since she also put a lot of inspiration into her writing. Group talk.

@Lani Nieu can you please break out the white board and draw this for me? 🧠

I’d really like to see this done by Wednesday so I can make a nice list for my evaluation.

Thanks,

CFS

cinema for sinners's avatar

Welll… I just read this

Ashes Of Love Poetry πŸ”₯'s avatar

.... and? Don't make me beg.